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Flower Deer :: CLOSED

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FLOWER DEER IS O P E N .


R U L E S - -

♥ You must pay either with PayPal or with points.
♥ You must pay within 24 hours
♥ Serious buyers only, if you cannot afford the adoptable, do not try to buy it.
♥ You are not allowed to re-sell the adoptable.

O W N E R : *Madolche
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

The color scheme and the idea behind the adoptable are both lovely, as deer girls are always a plus!
I find it appealing how you incorporated the leaf skirt in order to further the "natural" theme. I found aspects of this little adoptable to be original and fun.

However, there also seems to be a general lack of detail in the parts of her outfit that should stand out, such as with the leaf skirt. As I call it a "leaf skirt", I find I have to second guess myself on whether or not that is what you were trying to portray. I would suggest that more defining detail should be added, to make it more clear.

The hair is done in a simplistic, but nice manner. But in other areas, the simple techniques don't work as well, such as with the simple shading on the flowers and her dress. Also, the folds of fabric near her bust look wonky, and I would consider simplifying them.

All in all, I do not believe this adoptable should be priced quite as high as you have decided, but add a bit more detail and clean up the rough patches, and I could see someone buying her for your price. Keep up the great work!