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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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I find it appealing how you incorporated the leaf skirt in order to further the "natural" theme. I found aspects of this little adoptable to be original and fun.
However, there also seems to be a general lack of detail in the parts of her outfit that should stand out, such as with the leaf skirt. As I call it a "leaf skirt", I find I have to second guess myself on whether or not that is what you were trying to portray. I would suggest that more defining detail should be added, to make it more clear.
The hair is done in a simplistic, but nice manner. But in other areas, the simple techniques don't work as well, such as with the simple shading on the flowers and her dress. Also, the folds of fabric near her bust look wonky, and I would consider simplifying them.
All in all, I do not believe this adoptable should be priced quite as high as you have decided, but add a bit more detail and clean up the rough patches, and I could see someone buying her for your price. Keep up the great work!
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