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Flower Deer :: CLOSED by Rhuni Flower Deer :: CLOSED by Rhuni

FLOWER DEER IS O P E N .


R U L E S - -

♥ You must pay either with PayPal or with points.
♥ You must pay within 24 hours
♥ Serious buyers only, if you cannot afford the adoptable, do not try to buy it.
♥ You are not allowed to re-sell the adoptable.

O W N E R : *Madolche
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Critique by BombPrincess Nov 6, 2012, 5:44:32 AM
The color scheme and the idea behind the adoptable are both lovely, as deer girls are always a plus!
I find it appealing how you incorporated the leaf skirt in order to further the "natural" theme. I found aspects of this little adoptable to be original and fun.

However, there also seems to be a general lack of detail in the parts of her outfit that should stand out, such as with the leaf skirt. As I call it a "leaf skirt", I find I have to second guess myself on whether or not that is what you were trying to portray. I would suggest that more defining detail should be added, to make it more clear.

The hair is done in a simplistic, but nice manner. But in other areas, the simple techniques don't work as well, such as with the simple shading on the flowers and her dress. Also, the folds of fabric near her bust look wonky, and I would consider simplifying them.

All in all, I do not believe this adoptable should be priced quite as high as you have decided, but add a bit more detail and clean up the rough patches, and I could see someone buying her for your price. Keep up the great work!
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Madolche Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
Could I trade for this one too? XDD
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Rhuni Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sure, would you be able to do a sprite like this
[link] of the same OC I gave you a reference for earlier? ^^
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Madolche Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
Okies ~ So i owe you a sprite and a peekaboo icon

(i lost my base for the peek-a-boo icon so im making another ^^;;)
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Rhuni Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep ^^
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