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A new OC I created <3
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletred:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="210" title="Bullet; Red"/>Whats the first thing you notice? I noticed her face first, the one where it shows only her face. She's beautiful, and I noticed her face first, because of her beauty. I also noticed it's a different style than the rest of the drawings in this picture

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletorange:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="567" title="Bullet; Orange"/>What do you like the most? Her hair, her beautiful purple eyes, her sexy lips. And her tail. I love her tail.

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletyellow:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="566" title="Bullet; Yellow"/>The least? I guess I don't really like her profile shot. It looks.. a bit awkward and disproportional. Also, her left boot (Our left) isn't the same as the right boot. It's shaped differently, and that's really noticeable. So I would watch out for that next time.

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletgreen:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="209" title="Bullet; Green"/>:What could make it better? If the art styles were all the same. They don't look like they match.

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="211" title="Bullet; Blue"/>Whats the first thing you thought when you saw this? I thought she was hot. Hah.

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletpurple:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="212" title="Bullet; Purple"/>Vision? The vision would be better, if the art styles were all the same really. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="450" title="Star!"/><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="450" title="Star!"/>

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletpink:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="568" title="Bullet; Pink"/>Orginality Pretty original. Hence the OC.. ha.. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="450" title="Star!"/><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="450" title="Star!"/><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="450" title="Star!"/><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="450" title="Star!"/>

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletred:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="210" title="Bullet; Red"/>Technique Technique can use some work. With the proportional and such. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="450" title="Star!"/><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="450" title="Star!"/>

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletorange:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="567" title="Bullet; Orange"/>Impact I didn't feel much of an impact to be honest. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="450" title="Star!"/><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="17" height="16" alt=":star:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="450" title="Star!"/>